The fair night_holy love wooing day
The fair night_holy love wooing day西方诗人Haunted Whisperings 评论桑林的诗歌---评论如下
这是美丽又完全第一流的诗! 你已经为第一个职位呈现的令人惊异的钢笔!
我爱上述者, 爱在这里捕捉了强壮和真实的。。。美丽的!
这是Haunted Whisperings 为桑林的[The fair night_holy love wooing day] ，写的英文原文
This is beautiful, absolutely classic poetry! An amazing penning you have presented for a first post!
I love the above, love caught here strong and true...beautiful!
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下面是 西方诗人Haunted Whisperings 的评论
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Originally Posted by starseven0starseven0
That now although night.s mind hath breaked ，bloody，
But，respected，stood holy love，s burning that holy
Love，s will，stood tallest stately unfall that the spirit
Of dauntless valiant.
And like to stood king of hills-Xi ma la ya hill near stars that tallest，on the Earth，s shoulder.
This is beautiful, absolutely classic poetry! An amazing penning you have presented for a first post!
I love the above, love caught here strong and true...beautiful!
Welcome to the castle...XO
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[The fair night_holy love wooing day]
冯文淑-桑林作此英文诗歌,2008,2,15,0,47
Where，that now，fair night_holy Love
Wooing ｄａy with his breaked,bleeding mind,
Night with a pottery plate of the yang shao time
In his both hand.
That night.s breaked,bloody mind in a pottery plate did put,
And like to a milk_maid with milk_clean white
In her both hand.
That now although night.s mind hath breaked ，bloody，
But，respected，stood holy love，s burning that holy
Love，s will，stood tallest stately unfall that the spirit
Of dauntless valiant.
And like to stood king of hills-Xi ma la ya hill near stars that tallest，on the Earth，s shoulder.
O why, people gives me hatafuled,
Gives me cursed,gives me insulted,
Did my bosom tread,
And because i lov,d thee,
Lov,d thee,lov,d thee,
Men did me hatefuled,did me cursed,
Did me wrong, tread my mind.
And when am i that me own mind in my both hand,
Will my mind i do donate unto thee,
And like to a pilgrim with a saint implement
In pilgrim,s both hand,
But, people hath striked down my mind,
From my both hand,
Hath my honourn humiliated,
Breaked full of flower sweet of love my mind,
As horse of the dance,breaked head
Of infant,at land.
Thou taking a flower_basket,that collecting to laugh heartily moonlight
Of heavy sweet,
Thou upon fair bank,that very time.
O why, people gives me hatafuled,
Gives me cursed,gives me insulted,
Did my bosom tread,
And because i lov,d thee,
Lov,d thee,lov,d thee,
Men did me hatefuled,did me cursed,
Did me wrong, tread my mind.
And when am i that me own mind in my both hand,
Will my mind i do donate unto thee,
And like to a pilgrim with a saint implement
In pilgrim,s both hand,
But, people hath striked down my mind,
From my both hand,
Hath my honourn humiliated,
Breaked full of flower sweet of love my mind,
As horse of the dance,breaked head
Of infant,at land.
Thou taking a flower_basket,that collecting to laugh heartily moonlight
Of heavy sweet,
Thou upon fair bank,that very time.
O why, people gives me hatafuled,
Gives me cursed,gives me insulted,
Did my bosom tread,
And because i lov,d thee,
Lov,d thee,lov,d thee,
Men did me hatefuled,did me cursed,
Did me wrong, tread my mind.
And when am i that me own mind in my both hand,
Will my mind i do donate unto thee,
And like to a pilgrim with a saint implement
In pilgrim,s both hand,
But, people hath striked down my mind,
From my both hand,
Hath my honourn humiliated,
Breaked full of flower sweet of love my mind,
As horse of the dance,breaked head
Of infant,at land.
Thou taking a flower_basket,that collecting to laugh heartily moonlight
Of heavy sweet,
Thou upon fair bank,that very time.
That now although night.s mind hath breaked ，bloody，
But，respected，stood holy love，s burning that holy
Love，s will，stood tallest stately unfall that the spirit
Of dauntless valiant.
And like to stood king of hills-Xi ma la ya hill near stars that tallest，on the Earth，s shoulder.
Where，that now，fair night_holy Love
Wooing ｄａy with his breaked,bleeding mind,
Night with a pottery plate of the yang shao time
In his both hand.
That night.s breaked,bloody mind in a pottery plate did put,
And like to a milk_maid with milk_clean white
In her both hand.
Where，that now，fair night_holy Love
Wooing ｄａy with his breaked,bleeding mind,
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